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The table provides information about the subway systems in six various parts of the world.

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The table provides information about the subway systems in six various parts of the world. Overall, the underground in London opened first; in addition, it is also the most enormous. However, Tokyo has the most passengers per year. On the other hand, Kyoto has the least length and passengers. The most striking feature of the graph is that despite the fact that the railway system in London already was accessible in 1863; on top of that, it has 394 kilometres of route, it only has 775 million travellers every year. Another fact worth noting is that even though Tokyo only has the third-longest underground, 1927 million passengers travel by it a year. The most remarkable point of the graph is that although Kyoto opened its subway system in 1981, it has only an 11 km route; as a result, only 45 million people travel by it per year. The railway in Los Angeles is the newest one which was built in 2001; however, it is only 28 km long and has 5 million more passengers travel by it a year compared to Kyoto.
The table provides information about the subway systems in six various parts of the world.

Overall
, the underground in London opened
first
;
in addition
, it is
also
the most enormous.
However
, Tokyo has the most passengers per
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year
.
On the other hand
, Kyoto has the least length and passengers.

The most striking feature of the graph is that despite the fact that the railway system in London already was accessible in 1863;
on top of that
, it has 394
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kilometres
of route, it
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only
has 775
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million
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travellers
every
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year
. Another fact worth noting is that
even though
Tokyo
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only
has the third-longest underground, 1927
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million
passengers travel by it a year.

The most remarkable point of the graph is that although Kyoto opened its subway system in 1981, it has
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only
an 11 km route;
as a result
,
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only
45
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million
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people
travel by it per
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year
. The railway in Los Angeles is the newest one which
was built
in 2001;
however
, it is
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only
28 km long and has 5
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million
more passengers travel by it a
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year
compared to Kyoto.
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IELTS academic The table provides information about the subway systems in six various parts of the world.

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