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the salmon’s life cycle, which is known as one of the large-size fish category.

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The diagrams represented below display the salmon’s life cycle, which is known as one of the large-size fish category. Overall, there are a number of habitat changes of salmon, as it is growing-up. Specifically, there are also many terms of salmon in each of its life transformations. Based on the first diagram, salmon’s eggs are commonly can be found in a upper river which has slow-moving direction. The eggs will cracked about 5 to 6 months, before it will appear as ‘fry’ or baby salmon which has 3-8 cm of its length. This small fish, in the subsequent stage, will naturally move to lower river in order to spend its 4 years to become a smolt. The smolt, which length 12-15 cm, furthermore, will spend their life in the open sea for 3 years before it will transform as an adult salmon. This mature salmon then will reproduce in an upper river in order to sustain its species existence.

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