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The table provide information regarding the situation of marriage and age.

The table provide information regarding the situation of marriage and age. W5dxN

In 1960, the average age of bride was 21 years, but it slightly increased to 23 in 1970 and 25 in 1980. In 1990 and 2000, the age of bride steadily increased to 27 and 30 respectively. The average age of groom was 24 which sharply go up to 32 years from 1960 to 2000. Overall, it can be seen that, civil marriages rose, while the religion marriages fluctuated over the period of four decades. The average age of marriage of both genders also increased during the given time period.

In 1960, the average You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 of bride was 21 years, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it slightly
 increased to 23 in 1970 and 25 in 1980. In 1990 and 2000, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 of bride steadily
 increased to 27 and 30 respectively
. The average You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 of groom was 24 which sharply
 go up to 32 years from 1960 to 2000.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that, civil marriages rose, while the religion marriages fluctuated over the period of four decades. The average You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
age
 of marriage of both genders also
 increased during the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 time period. 