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he line graph illustrates the number of visitors who went abroad and those who came to the UK during two decades (1979-1999)

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The line graph illustrates the number of visitors who went abroad and those who came to the UK during two decades (1979-1999), while the bar chart reveals information about the favored countries visited by the British in a specific year (1999). Overall, it can be seen that the growth in the UK tourists to foreign countries was higher than overseas residents to the UK. In the terms of popular countries visited by UK citizens, there was a higher rate of tourists in France and Spain, while the other three countries (the USA, Greece, and Turkey) experienced a lower rate in the given period. As the line graph demonstrates, the number of British tourists abroad constituted approximately 13 million residents, while foreign countries' tourists to the UK stood at 10 million in 1979. Between 1979 and 1987, there was a sharp rise in the UK tourists to 20 million, while the number of overseas residents increased slowly to 12 million. Following this, both trends saw a gradual improvement (30 million and 21 million respectively) from 1987 to 1989. In the next decade (1989-1999), the number of UK visitors increased significantly and reached a peak at 55 million, whereas there was a slight rise in the number of overseas visitors to approximately 28 million. In 1999, the number of the UK visitors who visited France was slightly higher than in Spain (11 million compared to 9. 5). While the USA was visited by 4 million visitors, approximately 3. 5 million tourists came to Greece. As for Turkey, this country experienced the lowest rate of tourists at around 2 million. According to the bar graph, France and Spain were more popular destinations for British tourists than the other three countries.

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