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The table is provided with underground rail system information about the routes covered, the annual commuter passengers and the year the rail system was started. The information shown is in the table for the six cities. In general, two of the oldest systems are London and Paris, but it is Paris and Tokyo that have large numbers of annual commuters; while London is home to the largest road traveled 394 km. The table is provided with underground rail system information about the routes covered, the annual commuter passengers and the year the rail system was started. The information shown is in the table for the six cities. As we can see from the table, the oldest underground rail service provider is in London and also includes other railways in the world. On the other hand, Los Angeles is the city with the latest rail system as it was opened in 2001 and includes a 28 km rail line. Furthermore, Tokyo railway service started in 1927 but has the largest number of visitors which is about 1927 passengers, the largest number of all the other six cities, while Kyoto is home to a small number of visitors. Only 45 passengers at most.
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about the routes covered, the annual commuter
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. The
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for the six cities.
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, two of the oldest
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are London and Paris,
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it is Paris and Tokyo that have large
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of annual commuters; while London is home to the largest road traveled 394 km.

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with underground
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passengers
and the year the
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was
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. The
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for the six cities.

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, the oldest underground
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service provider is in London and
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, Los Angeles is the city with the latest
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as it
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in 2001 and includes a 28 km
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line.

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, Tokyo railway service
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in 1927
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has the largest
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of visitors which is about 1927
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, the largest
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of all the other six cities, while Kyoto is home to a
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