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The table compares and contrasts data on the differences in the demographics of four nations, namely Japan, Singapore, Vietnam and China in 2020.

The table compares and contrasts data on the differences in the demographics of four nations, namely Japan, Singapore, Vietnam and China in 2020. Wn7jb
The table compares and contrasts data on the differences in the demographics of four nations, namely Japan, Singapore, Vietnam and China in 2020. Generally speaking, While China has the largest number of residents, Singapore is the one which has the highest GDP. In all four countries, The number of people having the longest life span is in Japan, on the other hand, Vietnam has the shortest life expectancy. More specifically, There was a huge number of residents in China, at the figure of 1, 402. 67 million people which is 1276. 87 higher than that of Japan. Vietnam has approximately 97. 34 millions of people, which is significantly higher than the population of Singapore.
The table compares and contrasts data on the differences in the demographics of four nations,
namely
Japan, Singapore, Vietnam and China in 2020.

Generally
speaking, While China has the largest number of residents, Singapore is the one which has the highest GDP. In all four countries, The number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
having the longest life span is in Japan,
on the other hand
, Vietnam has the shortest life expectancy.

More
specifically
, There was a huge number of residents in China, at the figure of 1, 402. 67 million
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
which is 1276. 87 higher than that of Japan. Vietnam has approximately 97.
Use a singular form of the numeral here: "34 million".
34 millions of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
, which is
significantly
higher than the population of Singapore.
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