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Time spent by teen agers in a week from 2002 to 2007

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The bar graph illustrates the time spent by teenagers on activities(Going to pubs/discos, watching television, shopping, doing Homework, sports, watching DVDs, Bowling) in a week from 2002 to 2007. Overall, Teenagers spent most of their time watching television and the least amount of time Bowling. The time spent in Pubs, watching television shopping gradually increased from 2002 to 2007. Whereas time spent on doing Homework, sports and Bowling steadily decreased. The amount of time spent on watching DVDs rose from 2002 to 2005 and then it fell. In the Case of Pubs/discos, time spent almost doubled by the year 2007 when compared to 2002 although it stayed constant for Three years. The amount of time spent watching television and shopping steadily increased from 25 hours to38 hours and 7 hours to 15 hours. On the other hand, the time spent on doing Homework, Sports and Bowling decreased from 12 to 7 hours, 10 to 3 hours and 4 to 1 hour respectively. Time invested in watching DVDs rose from 11 hours to 17 hours from 2002 to 2005 and then it fell to 10 hours by 2007.
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watching DVDs, Bowling) in a week from 2002 to 2007.

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and the least amount of
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Bowling. The
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in Pubs, watching
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shopping
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increased from 2002 to 2007. Whereas
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on doing Homework, sports and Bowling
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decreased. The amount of
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on watching DVDs rose from 2002 to 2005 and then it fell.

In the Case of Pubs/discos,
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almost doubled by the year 2007 when compared to 2002 although it stayed constant for Three years.

The amount of
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and shopping
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to38
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and 7
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to 15 hours.

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on doing Homework, Sports and Bowling decreased from 12 to 7
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, 10 to 3
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and 4 to 1
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invested in watching DVDs rose from 11
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from 2002 to 2005 and then it fell to 10
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by 2007.
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