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The table indicates the statistic in the number of foreign visitors among 8 countries during the period between 2009 and 2010.

The table indicates the statistic in the number of foreign visitors among 8 countries during the period between 2009 and 2010. 96jxp
The table indicates the statistic in the number of foreign visitors among 8 countries during the period between 2009 and 2010. In general, the figure of international visitors in most of nations rose positively with the exception of the proportion of tourists in Hong Kong decreasing minimaly and France still remaining stable. While Turkey, China and Germany had an enormous increase in the statistics, the rest of countries just grew insignificantly. According to Germany, the nation with the highest proportion of international visitors by 23 million people in 2010 and the changes accounted for 109%. Turkey and China were witnessed the similar quantity of tourists in 2010 by 45 million people and the considerable changes, rougly 33% and 55%, respectively. The number of global tourists in some European countries such as Spain, the UK and Italy was seen a minimal figure with tiny change at around 1, 8%, 3, 6%, 2, 3%, subsequently. Foreign visitors in America registered an inconsiderable increase of 1 million from 2009 to 2010 and the change just approximately 1, 5%. France still maintained the same level in the number of tourists compared to the previous year without change. Hong Kong is the only countries that declined slightly in the quantity of international arrivals by 11 million in 2010 and the negative change at 11%.
The table indicates the statistic in the number of foreign
visitors
among 8
countries
during the period between 2009 and 2010.

In general
, the figure of international
visitors
in
most of nations
rose
positively
with the exception of
the proportion of
tourists
in Hong Kong decreasing
minimaly
and France
still
remaining stable. While Turkey, China and Germany had an enormous increase in the statistics, the rest of
countries
just
grew
insignificantly
.

According to Germany, the nation with the highest proportion of international
visitors
by 23
million
people
in 2010 and the
changes
accounted for 109%. Turkey and China
were witnessed
the similar quantity of
tourists
in 2010 by 45
million
people
and the considerable
changes
,
rougly
33% and 55%,
respectively
. The number of global
tourists
in
some
European
countries
such as Spain, the UK and Italy was
seen
a minimal figure with tiny
change
at around 1, 8%, 3, 6%, 2, 3%,
subsequently
.

Foreign
visitors
in America registered an inconsiderable increase of 1
million
from 2009 to 2010 and the
change
just
approximately 1, 5%. France
still
maintained the same level in the number of
tourists
compared to the previous year without
change
. Hong Kong is the
only
countries
that declined
slightly
in the quantity of international arrivals by 11
million
in 2010 and the
negative
change
at 11%.
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IELTS academic The table indicates the statistic in the number of foreign visitors among 8 countries during the period between 2009 and 2010.

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