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Audi, Volvo compare each other

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the graph which assest are limited with four big car company on the world wide shows us eight years of period that contains information about how many hours were needed to produce a car. overall, the graph illustrates that volvo spent approximately 22 hours to produce a car and it seems volvo was the most consistent company to produce a car back then between 1999 and 2006. volvo was being followed by nissan which was just slightly quicker to produce a car in those years. when the year of 1999 where the graph starts is being observed till 2001, audi had the longest amount of time value which is between 30-35 hours of time that was spend on produce a complete car. mercedes was following by audi with 25 hours more or less, which is interesting, because those two car companies are well known being ‘’premium’’ on the world wide and they spend much more time to produce a car than the other companies. ın brief, there were marked differences in times that being spent to produce a car between four companies in the period covered.
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IELTS academic Audi, Volvo compare each other

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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