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The line graph illustrate the quantity of traveller to four international museums in the peroid from 1980 to 2015.

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The line graph illustrate the quantity of traveller to four international museums in the peroid from 1980 to 2015. In general, the number of visitor to two museums Louvre, Vatican witnessed upward trends, while a reserved trend was shown in LonDon Science Museum. Another notable point in the graph is that Shenzhen Museum showed a levelling off trends during the period. Throughout the period, the Louvre dominated the market in the majority of the reesearch. Although, in the beginning LonDon Science was the third popular museum, in the last years there was a dramatic decrease to the least popular destination. To begin with, in 1980 Louvre was the most popular destination with about 8 millions visitors. In the next fifteen years, the quantity of traveller to Louvre experienced a moderate climb to 9 millions. Although, from 1995 to 2000, there was a slight dip in the number of visitor to Louvre of about 1 millions, in the last period it recovered and grew to appromixately 10 millions. Throughout the period, the quantity of traveller to Vatican Museums always surged from 5 milions to 9 milions. The number of visitors to Shenzen moderate decrease in the first twenty years before increasing and reach a peak at 2015 with about 4 millions. From 1980 to 1985, the quantity of travellers to LonDon Science remain stable around 4 milions. However, in the last thirty years, that figure drop dramatically and bottom out at appromixately 2 millions.
The line graph illustrate the
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peroid
from 1980 to 2015.

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, the number of
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Louvre, Vatican witnessed upward trends, while a reserved trend
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LonDon
Science
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Museum
. Another notable point in the graph is that Shenzhen
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a levelling off trends during the
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. Throughout the
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, the Louvre dominated the market in the majority of the
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reesearch
. Although, in the beginning
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LonDon
Science was the third popular
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, in the last years there was a dramatic decrease to the least popular destination.

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with, in 1980 Louvre was the most popular destination with about 8
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fifteen years, the
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to Louvre experienced a moderate climb to 9
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millions
. Although, from 1995 to 2000, there was a slight dip in the number of
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to Louvre of about 1
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, in the last
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it recovered and grew to
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appromixately
10
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milions
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moderate decrease in the
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increasing and reach a peak at 2015 with about 4
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Science remain stable around 4
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrate the quantity of traveller to four international museums in the peroid from 1980 to 2015.

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