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Audi, Volvo compare each other

Audi, Volvo compare each other GL5am
the graph whose assets are limited with four big car companies worldwide shows us eight years of period containing information about how many hours were needed to produce a car. overall, the graph illustrates that volvo spent approximately 22 hours producing a car, and it seems volvo was the most consistent company to deliver a vehicle between 1999 and 2006. volvo was being followed by nissan, which was just slightly quicker to create a car in those years. when the year 1999, where the graph starts is observed till 2001, audi had the most extended amount of time value, between 30-35 hours spent on producing a complete car. mercedes was followed by audi with 25 hours more or less, which is interesting because those two car companies are well-known being ‘’premium’’ worldwide, and they spend much more time producing a car than the other companies. ın brief, there were marked differences in times spent producing a car between four companies in the period covered.
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IELTS academic Audi, Volvo compare each other

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