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The table illustrates the total spending on studying abroad and the chart shows how much money students averagely spent on accommodation, tuition, and living cost when they studied in the four countries

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The table illustrates the total spending on studying abroad and the chart shows how much money students averagely spent on accommodation, tuition, and living cost when they studied in the four countries. Overall, studying abroad in country A is the most expensive while the expenditure of overseas students in country D is the lowest. Additionally, while international students have to spend the largest amount of money on living costs per week when studying in all countries, apart from country D, they pay the least for accommodation. As can be seen from the table, the amount of money paid out on studying overseas in 2 countries A and B is the highest, with 875 dollars and 735 dollars respectively. By contrast, the expense in country D is the lowest, at 435 dollars. Meanwhile, studying in country C is 105 dollars more expensive. Overseas students in four countries all spend below 300 dollars on accommodation, with the largest figure being 280 dollars in country B and the smallest figure accounting for 200 dollars in country D. In country A, the living expenses each week is 430 dollars, which is around 70 dollars higher than the tuition fees. Similarly, the amount of money students pay for living costs in countries B and C is about 30 dollars more than tuition fees. In contrast, the cost of living in country D is 225 dollars, which is slightly lower than tuition fees, at 235 dollars.
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when they studied in the four countries.

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A is the most expensive while the expenditure of overseas
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D is the lowest.
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D, they pay the least for accommodation.

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A and B is the highest, with 875
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and 735
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all spend below 300
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on accommodation, with the largest figure being 280
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B and the smallest figure accounting for 200
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the total spending on studying abroad and the chart shows how much money students averagely spent on accommodation, tuition, and living cost when they studied in the four countries

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