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The chart show the information relating to people within 15-minute drive to certain services in a particular region in UK.

The chart show the information relating to people within 15-minute drive to certain services in a particular region in UK. BLwNa
The given bar graph compares the percentage of people in urban areas and rural areas that could acess various services with in 15 minutes drive in a specific area UK. Overall, it is lucid that more urban than the rural people are within fifteen minutes drive to all these areas. However, the biggest difference between the urban and rural people is in acess to secondary school and shopping centre. After analyzing, if can be seen clearly that every citizens in 15 minutes drive to the general practitioner, petroleum pump, primary school and post office. The ratio for all these people is 100%. In comparison only 5% less than rural people can reach to all these facilities. Moreover, there was near about discrepancy of 2% was observed in the primary school and post office who belongs to village. Moving further, the proportion of more than 20% of individuals living metropolitan areas reached to shopping centre as compared to villagers.
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various services with in 15 minutes drive in a specific
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UK.
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are within fifteen minutes drive to all these
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to secondary school and shopping
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. After analyzing, if can be
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that every citizens in 15 minutes drive to the general practitioner, petroleum pump, primary school and post office. The ratio for all these
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people
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is
100%. In
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comparison
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rural
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can reach to all these facilities.
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, there was near about discrepancy of 2%
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in the primary school and post office who belongs to village. Moving
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, the proportion of more than 20% of individuals living metropolitan
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reached to shopping
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as compared to villagers.
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