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The table illustrates the quantity of five junk foods which was consumed in 2005, currently and later in 2025 in Melbourne.

The table illustrates the quantity of five junk foods which was consumed in 2005, currently and later in 2025 in Melbourne. Overall, Hamburger had the highest consumption amount in the past 2005 as well as currently and it is predicted to rise in the future. Moreover, fried rice and noodles were the least patronized foods in the past, currently and would continue to maintain that position in the future 2025. In 2005, the consumption value of hamburger was the greatest with 40 and has decreased slightly to 38 now. Meanwhile, it is estimated to rise significantly in 2025 to approximately 51. With regards to fried chicken, a total amount of 35 was recorded in 2005, rising steadily to 37 in present year and would experience a climb in 2025 to approximately 45. On the other hand, the consumption of salad was the lowest in the past year 2005 at an amount of 5, not only has there been a significant increase in its patronage to 15 now but also it is estimated to rocket to 41 in 2025. Considering fried rice and noodles, the recorded the same amount of 6 in 2005. Currently, there is a slight increase in their consumption of 9 and 8 respectively. On the contrary, patronage of these two foods is predicted to level off at 9 each in 2025.
The table illustrates the quantity of five junk foods which
was consumed
in 2005,
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currently
and later in 2025 in Melbourne.
Overall
, Hamburger had the highest
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consumption
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amount
in the past 2005
as well
as
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is predicted
to rise in the future.
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, fried rice and noodles were the least patronized foods in the past,
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currently
and would continue to maintain that position in the future 2025. In 2005, the
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consumption
value of hamburger was the greatest with 40 and has decreased
slightly
to 38
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now
. Meanwhile, it
is estimated
to rise
significantly
in 2025 to approximately 51.
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fried chicken, a total
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amount
of 35
was recorded
in 2005, rising
steadily
to 37 in present year and would experience a climb in 2025 to approximately 45.
On the other hand
, the
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consumption
of salad was the lowest in the past year 2005 at an
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amount
of 5, not
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only
has there been a significant increase in its patronage to 15
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now
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but
also
it
is estimated
to rocket to 41 in 2025. Considering fried rice and noodles, the recorded the same
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amount
of 6 in 2005.
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Currently
, there is a slight increase in their
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consumption
of 9 and 8
respectively
.
On the contrary
, patronage of these two foods
is predicted
to level off at 9 each in 2025.

IELTS academic The table illustrates the quantity of five junk foods which was consumed in 2005, currently and later in 2025 in Melbourne.

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