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The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below illustrate the most common benefits and drawbacks of Baren island, related to a survey of touristsOverall, most of the visitors are attracted to the friendliness and hostibaility of the people in the island. In constrast, the high and unreasonable cost of accomodation is the biggets factor that tourists are concern aboutIn term of advantages, the people on the island made up to the greatest segment, about 42%, followed by the scenery, accounted for 35%. Just 12% of the visitors agrred that the Baren island culture is the popular pros. And only 11% chose good accomodation as an advantageOn the other hand, the island still has some big disadvantages. The expensive living cost contributed to half of the chart, became the most common drawbacks that affected to the tourists. The entertainment in baren island comprised of 25%, made it to be the second cons that choosen by the visitors. Bad weather was the third disadvantages, accounted for 15%. And 10% of tourists complain about the poor food quality in the island
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IELTS academic The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.

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