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The following two pictures show the changes of buildings in Liverton Docks between 1980 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

These two maps present the current alters taken place in the Liveton Liverton Docks, basing on the features there in 1980. Obviously, a west-to-east river flew to the coast in the middle of the town in 1980. Four ships were found on the river. The type of buildings on both sides of the river were same (warehouse and crane), but there were twice as many on the north bank as there were on the south bank. Today, those ships have disappeared and two new bridges have been constructed over the east of river. To the north riverside, all the warehouses and cranes have been removed and replaced by new buildings, club and kids play area from west to east. At another side, a view path is designed along the river and lots of buildings have been built along it, including sailing shop, converted buildings, apartment and park. Overall, the residents who live in Liverton Dock have more convenient and happy life because of new infrastructures and entertainment facilities.
These two maps present the
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alters taken place in the
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Liveton
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Liverton
Docks, basing on the features there in 1980.

Obviously
, a west-to-east
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river
flew to the coast in the middle of the town in 1980. Four ships
were found
on the
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river
. The type of
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buildings
on both sides of the
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river
were same (warehouse and crane),
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but
there were twice as
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many
on the north bank as there were on the south bank.

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Today
, those ships have disappeared and two new bridges have
been constructed
over the east of
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river
. To the north riverside, all the warehouses and cranes have
been removed
and replaced by new
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buildings
, club and kids play area from west to east. At another side, a view path
is designed
along the
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river
and lots of
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buildings
have
been built
along it, including sailing shop, converted
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buildings
, apartment and park.

Overall
, the residents who
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live
in
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Liverton
Dock have more convenient and happy life
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because
of new infrastructures and entertainment facilities.

IELTS academic The following two pictures show the changes of buildings in Liverton Docks between 1980 and present.

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168 words
6.0
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