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The line graph shows the changes in the amount of the coffee exported from three countries between 1990 and 2015.

The given line graph illustrates how much coffee was exported in three different regions, namely Brazil, Costa Rica, and Colombia, from 1990 to 2015 and is measured in millions of kilograms. Overall, despite som fluctuation, three countries saw a upward trend. In addition, Brazil exported the most coffee in the end of the period. At the beginning, Costa Rica exported just over 10 million kilograms of coffee, which was the highest figure of the three countries. However, then, coffee exports dropped quichkly to a low of slightly over 5 million kilograms in 2000, although, from then on wards, they showed a dramatic increase to finish at the highest point of a round 17 million, just below Brazil. In 1990, coffee exports from Bzaril stood at approximately 7 million kilograms, rising steadily over the 25- year period to reach a peak of exactly 20 million in 2015. By contrast, the figures for Colombia began much lower at just around 3 million kilograms. They overtook Costa Rica in 2000, with coffee exports reaching 8 million, but there was then a sharp decrease to only 1. 5 million in 2005, although they climbed rapidly over the following 10 years to end at precisely 10 million kilograms in 2015.
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coffee
was exported
in three
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different
regions,
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Brazil, Costa Rica, and Colombia, from 1990 to 2015 and
is measured
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millions
of kilograms.

Overall
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upward trend.
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, Brazil exported the most
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coffee
in the
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end
of the period.

At the beginning, Costa Rica exported
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over
10
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million
kilograms of
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coffee
, which was the highest figure of the three countries.
However
, then,
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coffee
exports dropped
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quichkly
to a low of
slightly
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over
5
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million
kilograms in 2000, although, from then on wards, they
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showed
a dramatic increase to finish at the highest point of a round 17
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million
,
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just
below Brazil.

In 1990,
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coffee
exports from
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Bzaril
stood at approximately 7
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million
kilograms, rising
steadily
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over
the 25- year period to reach a peak of exactly 20
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million
in 2015. By contrast, the figures for Colombia began much lower at
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just
around 3
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million
kilograms. They overtook Costa Rica in 2000, with
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coffee
exports reaching 8
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million
,
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but
there was then a sharp decrease to
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1. 5
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million
in 2005, although they climbed
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over
the following 10 years to
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end
at
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10
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million
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IELTS academic The line graph shows the changes in the amount of the coffee exported from three countries between 1990 and 2015.

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