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the production of soft drink.

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The diagram illustrates the steps involved in the production of soft drink. In order to make this kind of beverage, the raw water are processed in five stages begining with preparing the water for the drinks, mixing product with ingredients dan packing before being the drink is delivered. The first stages of making carbonated drinks involves filtering raw waters before it is passed though a softener. An other chemical is added on this water cleaning process before going to the next step. After that, the clean water is heated into electic mechine and is evaporated into cooling pipe before the carbonation process. The mixing process involved in a tank with the carbonated water is mixed with three ingredients (colouring, syrup, and flavour). After though the thrid step, the beverage is filtered and filled into bottles or cans. The last step is packed this final product into boxes and the soft drink is ready to deliver.
The diagram illustrates the
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steps
involved in the production of soft drink.

In order to
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make
this kind of beverage, the raw
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water
are processed
in five stages
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begining
with preparing the
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water
for the
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drinks
, mixing product with ingredients
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dan
packing
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before
being the
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drink
is delivered
.

The
first
stages of making carbonated
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drinks
involves filtering raw
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waters
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before
it
is passed
though a softener.
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An other
chemical is
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added
on this
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water
cleaning process
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before
going to the
next
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step
. After that, the clean
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water
is heated
into
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electic
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mechine
and
is evaporated
into cooling pipe
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before
the carbonation process.

The mixing process involved in a tank with the carbonated
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water
is mixed
with three ingredients (
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colouring
, syrup, and
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flavour
). After though the
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thrid
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step
, the beverage
is filtered
and filled into bottles or cans. The last
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step
is packed
this final product into boxes and the soft
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drink
is ready to deliver.
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IELTS academic the production of soft drink.

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4 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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