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The table illustrates the involvement of men and women in various physical activities during two years in UK.

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The table illustrates the involvement of men and women in various physical activities during two years in UK. Overall, as it is shown the majority of people have chosen to swim at that period of time and the lowest percentage was for jogging. Meanwhile, the percentage of females who have chosen to cycle was half the percentage of males. The participating of male in indoor activity was Increasing during the years, while the percentage of female was remaining the same. However, there was a slightly increasing of percentage of male who involved in cycling. Furthermore, for female from 2005 to 06 had the highest percentage then the figures stay remained. In addition to that, jogging sports had such a softly increasing of the figures in both genders during that period of time.
The table illustrates the involvement of
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men
and women in various physical activities during two years in UK.

Overall
, as it
is shown
the majority of
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people
have chosen to swim at that period of time and the lowest
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percentage
was for jogging. Meanwhile, the
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percentage
of females who have chosen to cycle was half the
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percentage
of males.

The participating of male in indoor activity was

Increasing during the years, while the
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percentage
of female was remaining the same.

However
, there was a
slightly
increasing of
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percentage
of male who involved in cycling.
Furthermore
, for female from 2005 to 06 had the highest
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percentage
then the figures stay remained.

In addition
to that, jogging sports had such a
softly
increasing of the figures in both genders during that period of time.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the involvement of men and women in various physical activities during two years in UK.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
132 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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