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The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. bnpQ

The numbers of both foreign and Australian students joining Australian universities are increasing all over the years. On an annual basis, the accumulative number of Australian student in Australian universities is higher than that for students from other countries. While the number of new students belonging to Australia, is lower than that of foreign students, newly joining the Australian universities. It is clear that, the overall number of Australian students did not change in the last three years, in comparison to the overall number of non-Australian students; which has been jumping year after year. Concerning those new students, it is worth noting that, the number of Australian students is not constant on a yearly basis; it is changeable. However, it is evident that, their numbers are on average 200, 000 students. On the other hand, the number of the new non- Australian students was increasing until 2009 and 2010. Thus, in the last two years, the non-Australian students number who are newly joining remained almost constant.

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