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The pie chart shows the percentage of British students who were able to speak languages other than the English in the year 2000 and 2010.

The pie chart shows the percentage of British students who were able to speak languages other than the English in the year 2000 and 2010. WMXK
The pie chart shows the percentage of British students who were able to speak languages other than the English in the year 2000 and 2010. Overall, the majority of the students spoke Spanish in the Years 2000 and 2010. In 2000, 30 % of the students spoke Spanish. In contrast, it increased by 5% in 2010. However, in the year 2000, 20% of the student population spoke no other language than English but in 2010 only 10% of students spoke no other language. Additionally, the percentage of students who spoke only French increased by 5% in 2010's compared to 2000. The percentage of students speaking only German Steed scene in the year 2000 in 2010 which was 10%. number of students who spoke two other languages Voss 10% in the year 2000; however, it was increased by 5% in 2010 which was the 15% of the total population. Interestingly, the population of French speaking students was 15% in mm and it was reduced to 10% in the year 2010. Finally, students speaking other languages increase by 5%, which was 15% in the year 2000 and 20% in the year 2010.
The pie chart
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the percentage of British
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who were able to speak
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languages
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other
than the English in the
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year
2000 and 2010.

Overall
, the majority of the
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students
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spoke
Spanish in the Years 2000 and 2010. In 2000, 30 % of the
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students
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spoke
Spanish.
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, it increased by 5% in 2010.
However
, in the
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year
2000, 20% of the
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student
population
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spoke
no
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other
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language
than English
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in 2010
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only
10% of
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students
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spoke
no
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other
language.

Additionally
, the percentage of
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students
who
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spoke
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only
French increased by 5%
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compared to 2000. The percentage of
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German Steed scene in the
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2000 in 2010 which was 10%.
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number
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languages
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10% in the
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year
2000;
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, it
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by 5% in 2010 which was the 15% of the total population.
Interestingly
, the population of
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French speaking
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students
was 15% in mm and it was
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reduced
to 10% in the
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year
2010.
Finally
,
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speaking
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other
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increase by 5%, which was 15% in the
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year
2000 and 20% in the
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2010.
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