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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities. M2bk

Behavior of drinking and buying coffee and tea of people in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart are depicted by the bar chart. Overall, all of the cities have a same trend except Adelaide. People in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, and Hobart had the highest number of having coffee or tea by went to a cafe. Meanwhile, in Adelaide, the percentage of people bought instant coffee and went to the café was almost same. In last 4 weeks, all of the five cities in Australia had percentage below than 45% in bought fresh coffee. The lowest number of this way was Brisbane and Adelaide with percentage almost 35% and the highest number was Sydney and Melbourne close to 45%. People enjoyed instant coffee in five cities in Australia had second position if was compared with others, except in Adelaide. In Adelaide, the number of percentage people had a instant coffee is the highest position although the number almost same with went to cafe. People got the coffee or tea by went to café was the most enormous percentage in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, and Hobart. The number were not less than 55%, but in the Brisbane, the number close to 55%.

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. Meanwhile, in Adelaide, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
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people
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 to the café was almost same.

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. The lowest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of this way was Brisbane and Adelaide with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
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 was Sydney and Melbourne close to 45%. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
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coffee
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number
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coffee
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number
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went
 to 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
.

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People
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
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coffee
 or tea by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflyretiretravelmoveleavepass
went
 to café was the most enormous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
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number
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but
 in the Brisbane, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
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