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The table illustrates the expenditure of six different catogories per month in Australia household between 1991 and 2001.

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The table illustrates the expenditure of six different catogories per month in Australia household between 1991 and 2001. It is clear that there were increase slightly in total of the average of the money spending on six categories from 1991 to 2001. The expenditure spent on others goods and services was the largest in both time frames, while the average money spent on clothing was the smallest in Australia in both 1991 and 2001. Family’ money spent on other goods and services in 1991 and 2001 were the highest when compared with other which were 250 and 270 million dollars. The money of one household spent on Food, Electricity and Water per month were significant lower 155 and 75 in 1991, 160 and 120 in 2001 respectively. The money spent per month of a family on Clothing, Transport and Housing per month were the lowest, total money spent on these three categories in total just nearly two-sevens of the summary of six sectors.
The table illustrates the expenditure of six
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in Australia household between 1991 and 2001.

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that there were increase
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spending on six categories from 1991 to 2001. The expenditure
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on others
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and services was the largest in both time frames, while the average
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on clothing was the smallest in Australia in both 1991 and 2001.

Family’
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on other
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and services in 1991 and 2001 were the highest when compared with other which were 250 and 270 million dollars. The
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of one household
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on Food, Electricity and Water per
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were significant lower 155 and 75 in 1991, 160 and 120 in 2001
respectively
.

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of a family on Clothing, Transport and Housing per
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were the lowest, total
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on these three categories in total
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two-sevens of the summary of six sectors.

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