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The line graph provides the average monthly temperatures and the table shows the average hours of sunshine for a year in London, New York and Sydney. Overall, it is clear that London and New York are getting warmer but the temperatures start to drop near the end of the year, while for Sydney the opposite is true According to the graph, in January, the temperatures in London are higher than New York with figures 8 and about 4 respectively. As temperatures in the both cities continued to rise, New York’s temperature become higher than London’s in March, the figures continued to rise through July before showing a downward trend through December with temperatures lower in New York than London For Sydney, the temperatures start to drop from January to July and then rise again towards the end of the year with the lowest point just above 15. From this table it can be seen that New York has the highest number of hours exposed to the sunshine(2535 hours) and higher than Sydney(2473 hours). The total number of sunny hours in London is the least and it is 1180 hours

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 of the year, while for Sydney the opposite is true

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