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The line graph provides the average monthly temperatures and the table shows the average hours of sunshine for a year in London, New York and Sydney. Overall, it is clear that London and New York are getting warmer but the temperatures start to drop near the end of the year, while for Sydney the opposite is true According to the graph, in January, the temperatures in London are higher than New York with figures 8 and about 4 respectively. As temperatures in the both cities continued to rise, New York’s temperature become higher than London’s in March, the figures continued to rise through July before showing a downward trend through December with temperatures lower in New York than London For Sydney, the temperatures start to drop from January to July and then rise again towards the end of the year with the lowest point just above 15. From this table it can be seen that New York has the highest number of hours exposed to the sunshine(2535 hours) and higher than Sydney(2473 hours). The total number of sunny hours in London is the least and it is 1180 hours
The line graph provides the average monthly
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temperatures
and the table
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shows
the average
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hours
of sunshine for a year in London,
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New
York and Sydney.
Overall
, it is
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clear
that London and
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New
York are getting warmer
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but
the
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temperatures
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start
to drop near the
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end
of the year, while for Sydney the opposite is true

According to the graph, in January, the
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temperatures
in London are higher than
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New
York with figures 8 and about 4
respectively
. As
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temperatures
in the both cities continued to rise,
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New
York’s
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temperature
become higher than London’s in March, the figures continued to rise through July
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before
showing a downward trend through December with
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temperatures
lower in
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New
York than
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London


For Sydney, the
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temperatures
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start
to drop from January to July and then rise again towards the
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end
of the year with the lowest point
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just
above 15. From this table it can be
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seen
that
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New
York has the highest number of
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hours
exposed to the sunshine(2535
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hours)
and higher than Sydney(2473
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hours)
. The total number of sunny
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hours
in London is the least and it is 1180
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hours

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