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The maps below show information about predictional changes on the city road in the coming years.

The maps below show information about predictional changes on the city road in the coming years. X7gVw
The supplied maps compares current condition and modification of a single city in the soon periods. Looking from an overall perspective, it is apparent that the given town is anticipated to modernize, with new facilities such as building new road and collosals, varied considerably. As charts highlights, Air field in the northwest of city that just north of roundabout which located east of town, on the A2 line, is expected to modify with industrial estate. another notable change is that at the middle part of the state new collosal line is likely to construct that just above of gas station. Looking for details, although new road is foreseen to erect at the top of the map that linked industrial estate with city way which across from near of railway. It is interesting to note that railway line, build up area that east of city, and town center is not expected to alter. However, modern road is proposed to builot that is expected to locate from east of town center to above of main raiway.
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north of roundabout which located east of
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to modify with industrial estate.
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line is likely to construct that
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above of gas station. Looking for
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, although
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road is foreseen to erect at the top of the map that linked industrial estate with city way which across from near of railway. It is interesting to note that railway line, build up area that east of city, and
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center is not
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