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The tables below are the results of research, which examined the average percentage marks scored by boys and girls of different ages in several school subjects.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.  

The tables below are the results of research, which examined the average percentage marks scored by boys and girls of different ages in several school subjects. kbPQR
The table provides information about normal percentage marks by boys and girls in different age groups, which were results of a study in several different school subjects. Overall, sports for males is the dominant subject, on the contrary it is not popular with females. Meanwhile, language is liked most by the oldest age group, yet boys don't take a liking to language. Firstly, boys show a upward trend to wards sports and science. What's more is that language is lowest for 15 year olds, so does science which has an acute growth then an abrupt dip. On the other hand, language and maths are the most accepted by females. For girls sports, which is 60% for 15 year olds.
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, sports for males is the dominant subject,
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most by the oldest age group,
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boys don't take a liking to language.

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, boys
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15 year olds
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does science which has an acute growth then an abrupt dip.

On the other hand
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maths
are the most
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by females. For girls sports, which is 60% for
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15 year olds
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IELTS academic The tables below are the results of research, which examined the average percentage marks scored by boys and girls of different ages in several school subjects.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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