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The table illustrates the amount of people who visited three seaside villages in one European country.

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The table illustrates the amount of people who visited three seaside villages in one European country. Overall, it can be seen that the peak level of the table is 25, 000 people visited Angleford and the lowest point is 1000 people visited Haventon throughout the given timeframe. In 1990, Angleford was visited by 10, 100 people, which was more than the visitors to Swansteed, equal to 8, 000. 1000 people went to Haventon in the same year, making it the lowest number of visitors. After two decades, in 2010, the number of visitors to Swansteed decreased considerably at 6500, which was the lowest point in this year. Other two towns, Angleford and Haventon accepted an increased number of visitors this year at 25000 and 11000 relatively, which was a significant climb for these towns.
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three seaside villages in one European country.
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that the peak level of the table is 25, 000
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Angleford
and the lowest point is 1000
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Haventon
throughout the
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In 1990,
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Angleford
was
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by 10, 100
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, which was more than the visitors to
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Swansteed
, equal to 8, 000. 1000
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Haventon
in the same year, making it the lowest number of visitors.

After two decades, in 2010, the number of visitors to
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Swansteed
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at 6500, which was the lowest point in this year. Other two towns,
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Angleford
and
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Haventon
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an increased number of visitors this year at 25000 and 11000
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, which was a significant climb for these towns.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the amount of people who visited three seaside villages in one European country.

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