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The chart gives data on the complaints received by telephone email/fax and in person from January to June

The chart gives data on the complaints received by telephone email/fax and in person from January to June VrQ2w
The given chart provides information about the number of complaints received by telephone email/fax and in person to an Airline throughout a six month period from January to June. As can be seen the number of complaints in person represents a much more dramatic rise all the time period. Another interesting fact is that lodging a claim by email/fax decreases exclusively during the same period. To begin the degree of complaints taken by telephone email/fax and in person starts at about 900, just under 800 and just over 400 respectively in January. Protests by telephone and email/fax show a slight decrease while those in person gradually increase in the first term. However, till the March there is a marked rise in the number of complaints by phone amounting to the same as in the first term and make up around 800. Looking at the second three-month period, in the April the degrees of those three types of complaints stand at about 1250, under 600 and around 1000, according to the order presented in the chart. The number of lodging a claim in person goes uo rapidly and finishes at about 1900, while that by telephone fluctuates, then reaches to 1600 at the end of this time period. In contrast, claims by emal/fax reduce steadily and make up just under 400 at the same time.
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to an Airline throughout a
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from January to June.
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represents a much more dramatic rise all the time
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. Another interesting fact is that lodging a claim by email/fax decreases exclusively during the same
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. To
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in January. Protests by
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a slight decrease while those in
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up around 800. Looking at the second three-month
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, in the April the degrees of those three types of
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complaints
stand at about 1250, under 600 and around 1000, according to the order presented in the chart. The
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number
of lodging a claim in
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under 400 at the same time.
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IELTS academic The chart gives data on the complaints received by telephone email/fax and in person from January to June

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