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The table illustrates the amount of carbon dioxide which is released into the environment in 5 different countries namely China, US, Russia, India, Japan in 2017 and 2018

The table illustrates the amount of carbon dioxide which is released into the environment in 5 different countries namely China, US, Russia, India, Japan in 2017 and 2018 70lL5
The table illustrates the amount of carbon dioxide which is released into the environment in 5 different countries namely China, US, Russia, India, Japan in 2017 and 2018 Overall, the data bout the production of carbon dioxide in the US took the lead in the first stage, but the latter time that top was surpassed by the figure for China. In 2017, the amount of CO2 released into the environment in the US and China was nearly 5 times as high as other nations, while in the US that figure was 20. 1 tonnes per person and was 5682 tonnes total. Besides, in China the CO2 produce just was around 6, 6 tonnes per citizen, it was much lower even than 3 other countries and was 5130 in general. Moreover, the production of Co2 in Russia, India and Japan were 10, 15 and 10 per inhabitant and a total of 1704, 1259 and among to nations with the least Co2 produce. In 2018, The US witnessed a slight increase in the production of Co2 by 2% and fell to the top 2 of the given chart, whereas the figure for China rose dramatically and reached to top 1 with 5694 tonnes in general, higher than the US with 5568 tonnes. Furthermore, the amount of Co2 released into the environment in Russia and Japan dual not significant changed and decreased minimally to 1699 and 1187 respectively. Besides, there was a dramatic rise in the production of Co2 in India with 8% and a total of 1359 tonnes
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China, US, Russia, India, Japan in 2017 and 2018

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, the data bout the
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of carbon dioxide in the US took the lead in the
first
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the latter time that top
was surpassed
by the figure for China.

In 2017, the amount of CO2 released into the environment in the US and China was
nearly
5 times as high as other nations, while in the US that figure was 20. 1 tonnes per person and was 5682 tonnes total.
Besides
, in China the CO2 produce
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was around 6, 6 tonnes per citizen, it was much lower even than 3 other countries and was 5130
in general
.
Moreover
, the
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production
of Co2 in Russia, India and Japan were 10, 15 and 10 per inhabitant and a total of 1704, 1259 and among to nations with the least Co2 produce.

In 2018, The US witnessed a slight increase in the
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production
of Co2 by 2% and fell to the top 2 of the
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given
chart, whereas the figure for China rose
dramatically
and reached to top 1 with 5694 tonnes
in general
, higher than the US with 5568 tonnes.
Furthermore
, the amount of Co2 released into the environment in Russia and Japan dual not significant
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changed
and decreased
minimally
to 1699 and 1187
respectively
.
Besides
, there was a dramatic rise in the
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production
of Co2 in India with 8% and a total of 1359 tonnes
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the amount of carbon dioxide which is released into the environment in 5 different countries namely China, US, Russia, India, Japan in 2017 and 2018

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