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The GPD grew per year for three different countries from 2007 to 2010, measured by percentage.

The GPD grew per year for three different countries from 2007 to 2010, measured by percentage. J3x3e
This bar graph illustrates how GPD grew per year for three different countries from 2007 to 2010, measured by percentage. In 2007, the figure for Tunisia was higher than Japan. However, in 2009, the percentage of GPD growth in Japan was more than Tunisia at nearly 5. 3 % and just above 3 %, respectively. The trend of Ecuador increased gradually between 2007 at almost 3. 2 % and 2008 at just below 5 %, followed by a sharp decline up to 1. 3 % in 2009, thereafter, it rose dramatically ending at 2. 3 % in 2010. Regarding to Japan, this figure reached its peak at nearly 6. 5 % in 2010. Whilst in 2007 was at the lowest point at 2 %. Focusing on 2009, the figure for Japan was much more than Ecuador at approximately 5. 2 % and about 1. 2 %, respectively. On the other hand, the figure for Japan in 2010 was nearly three times as many as Ecuador at almost 6. 2 and around 2. 2, respectively. Overall, the figure for Japan in GPD growth was the highest, while Ecuador was the lowest in the most of the timescale. (187)
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countries from 2007 to 2010, measured by percentage.

In 2007, the
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for Tunisia was higher than
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growth in
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was more than Tunisia at
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. The trend of Ecuador increased
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below 5 %, followed by a sharp decline up to 1. 3 % in 2009, thereafter, it rose
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reached its peak at
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for
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was much more than Ecuador at approximately 5. 2 % and about 1. 2 %,
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in 2010 was
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as Ecuador at almost 6. 2 and around 2. 2,
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for
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in
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growth was the highest, while Ecuador was the lowest in the most of the timescale. (187)

IELTS academic The GPD grew per year for three different countries from 2007 to 2010, measured by percentage.

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