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The table illustrates that about the speaking ability of the people.

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The table illustrates that about the speaking ability of the people. Further who can speak different languages other than their mother tongue. Also, table provides data about five languages in the world. Overall, Majority of the world can speak Mandarin Chinese as the first and additional language by contrast, the least population can speak Portuguese as whole. In addition to that the table provide information widely speaking languages as English. The highest number of people can speak Mandarin Chinese which is 1090 MN. Out of that, 190 Mn can speak as an additional language. When it comes to the ability of Hindi speakers, It is third highest number of speaking language is the world. Out of 490 Mn, Majority of people are native speakers which amounts to 370 Mn. English language is the second place of the table and 603 Mn speak English as their second language. It is noticeable that more than fifty percent of the speakers are not native speakers where only 399 Mn speak as their mother tongue. In comparison to Arabic and Portuguese, it is slightly higher than Arabic speaker which is 230 Mn and 213 Mn are used Portuguese in total. However, while considering the number of native speakers of Arabic and Portuguese are almost similar. Thus, 10% of the total number of Arabic speakers are using their second language. Only 10 Mn speak Portuguese as an additional language is being the lowest amount in the table. In general, Mandarin Chinese are speakers top in the table while being the total number of lowest speakers are Portuguese. English and Hindi and Arabic are holding the second, third and fourth places of the table.
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Portuguese as whole.
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as an additional
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language
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is the world. Out of 490 Mn,
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and 603 Mn
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English as their second
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Portuguese as an additional
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