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The table illustrates some of the fresh food’s price in Britain in three specific time periods.

The table illustrates some of the fresh food’s price in Britain in three specific time periods. 2arDk
The table illustrates some of the fresh food’s price in Britain in three specific time periods. Overall, while the cost of fruit increased, that of vegetables decreased. Although price changes were consistent across the period, carrots and apples showed the most significant price changes, more or less reserving their position. The cost of fruits was high, with prices of bananas, kiwi fruits growing only slightly every year, but apples skyrocketed to just over 1. 5 pounds by 2014. Almost the same as bananas grew slightly on average 7 pounds every year, while kiwi fruits rose slightly on an average 1 pound every year (2012, 2013, 2014). On the other hand, the price of vegetables in Britain reduced over the period. While there were significant price changes in carrots, which stood at over the 2 pounds, but had reduced to 0. 60 pounds by 2014. Likewise, there were insignificant price changes in onions and potatoes, which reduced slightly between 2012 and 2014.
The table illustrates
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some of the
fresh food’s
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price
in Britain in three specific time periods.

Overall
, while the cost of
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fruit
increased, that of vegetables decreased. Although
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price
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changes
were consistent across the period, carrots and apples
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showed
the most significant
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price
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changes
, more or less reserving their position.

The cost of
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fruits
was high, with
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prices
of bananas, kiwi
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fruits
growing
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only
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slightly
every year,
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but
apples skyrocketed to
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just
over 1.
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5 pounds
by 2014. Almost the same as bananas grew
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slightly
on average
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7 pounds
every year, while kiwi
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fruits
rose
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slightly
on an average
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1 pound
every year (2012, 2013, 2014).

On the other hand
, the
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price
of vegetables in Britain
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reduced
over the period. While there were significant
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price
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changes
in carrots, which stood at over the
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2 pounds
,
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but
had
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reduced
to 0.
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60 pounds
by 2014.
Likewise
, there were insignificant
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price
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changes
in onions and potatoes, which
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reduced
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slightly
between 2012 and 2014.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates some of the fresh food’s price in Britain in three specific time periods.

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6.0
Overall Band Score
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