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Percentage of the population they living in city place in the world.

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The bar chart illustrates about percentage of The crowds they living in city place in the earth. Data are given different years, 1950, 2007, 2030. Overall, clearly show in the chart, the highest community were lived in North America at 2030. Moreover, among a three year ga people lived ratio was countinuesly upward trend. As presented from given data, in 1950, 29 percent crowds were lived in the world and the highest people lived in 2030 at same place. Africa and Asia were the lowest family lived, 15 and 17 percent respectively. Europe population were stayed more than Latin America, 51 and 42 percent separately. In North America, the highest lived ratio 64 percent in urban place in 1950. Furthermore, the percentage of population lived in metropolitan increase significantly in 2007 compared to the ratio of 1950. The population were lived in Europe lower in 2007 than 2030, 72 and 78 percent respectively. The highest people lived in North America in 2007, 79 percent population lived in there.
The bar chart illustrates about percentage of The crowds
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crowds were
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in the world and the highest
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in 2030 at same place. Africa and Asia were the lowest family
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, 15 and 17
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respectively
. Europe
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were stayed
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. In North America, the highest
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ratio 64
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in urban place in 1950.

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, the percentage of
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population
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in metropolitan increase
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in 2007 compared to the ratio of 1950. The
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were
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in Europe lower in 2007 than 2030, 72 and 78
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respectively
. The highest
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people
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in North America in 2007, 79
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IELTS academic Percentage of the population they living in city place in the world.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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