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The table illustrates four reasons why adults in the UK have attended arts events over the past twenty years.

The table illustrates four reasons why adults in the UK have attended arts events over the past twenty years. The major reason over the whole twenty-year period was a desire to see a specific performer or artist; while the least important reason was attending arts events for work-related reasons. The percentage of people who attended events out of a desire to see a particular performer has remained relatively stable throughout the twenty-year period; varying from 58% twenty years ago to 56% today. On the other hand, the percentage of people accompanying children has shown a significant increase, from 9% 20 years ago to just under a quarter today. As far as those who attended arts events because of special occasions or celebrations are concerned, the percentage fell slightly from 27% 20 years ago to 20% a decade ago, dropping dramatically to 9% today. There has been a slight increase in the percentage of people attending arts events for work or business, from 6% 20 years ago to just over 10% today. Overall, there has been a rise in people attending events in order to accompany children and for work-related reasons, while fewer people choose to attend an arts event as a form of celebration.
The table illustrates four
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why adults in the UK have attended
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arts
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events
over the past twenty years. The major
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reason
over the whole twenty-year period was a desire to
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see
a specific performer or artist; while the least
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important
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reason
was attending
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arts
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events
for work-related reasons.

The
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percentage
of
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people
who attended
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events
out of a desire to
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see
a particular performer has remained
relatively
stable throughout the twenty-year period; varying from 58% twenty years ago to 56%
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today
.

On the other hand
, the
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percentage
of
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people
accompanying children has shown a significant increase, from 9% 20 years ago to
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just
under a quarter
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today
. As far as those who attended
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arts
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events
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because
of special occasions or celebrations
are concerned
, the
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percentage
fell
slightly
from 27% 20 years ago to 20% a decade ago, dropping
dramatically
to 9%
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today
.

There has been a slight increase in the
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percentage
of
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people
attending
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arts
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events
for work or business, from 6% 20 years ago to
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just
over 10%
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today
.

Overall
, there has been a rise in
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people
attending
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events
in order to accompany children and for work-related
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reasons
, while fewer
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people
choose to attend an
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arts
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event
as a form of celebration.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates four reasons why adults in the UK have attended arts events over the past twenty years.

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204 words
6.0
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