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The graph shows the income of four cafes in New York in last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph above illustrated the fluctuation of income of four cafes in New York during the year before. As the graph shows, while The Tea Room saw a downward trend in income during last year, income of other three cafes, which included Internet Express, Wifi Cafe and Cafe Cool, experienced an upward trend. Income of The Tea Room fluctuated during January and June in the range from about 120, 000 USD to nearly 180, 000 USD. The figures kept fluctuating but a little more stable until it dropped dramatically in October from 140, 000 USD to about 50, 000 USD IN December. For Internet Express, earnings fluctuated from 80, 000 USD to 100, 000 USD during the first eight months of last year then started to rise considerably 10 140, 000 USD at the end of the year. Income of Wifi Cafe grew steadily from 50, 000 USD to 60, 000 USD from January to May before fluctuating between 60, 000 USD and 100, 000 USD during the next five months. After that, the figures increased dramatically to about 190, 000 USD, which is the highest income among four cafes at the end of the year. There were three significant stages in the income changes of Cafe Cool. The first stage included the fluctuation between 20, 000 USD and 40, 000 USD during the first half of the year. This stage was followed by another fluctuation from 20, 000 USD to 60, 000 USD until the figure rose sharply up to 120, 000 USD in December.

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