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The table illustrates diffrences in the temperatures and daylight hours in Mumbai and Moscow on the same weekend in May 2017.

The table illustrates diffrences in the temperatures and daylight hours in Mumbai and Moscow on the same weekend in May 2017. Myego

The table illustrates diffrences in the temperatures and daylight hours in Mumbai and Moscow on the same weekend in May 2017. It is noticeable that while in Moscow the temperature in 3 days had a lot of variation, in Mumbai the temperature were relatively stable. As we can see, in Mumbai the temperature didn’t change much from Friday to Sunday, with the highest figure being 33. 4C and the lowest being 15C. The sun often rising at about 6am and the sun was shining about 13 hours Meanwhile, in Moscow the weather has changed markdely in 3 days. The highest temperature was 17C on Friday then slightly decreased at 13C on Sartuday and rose at 15C on Sunday. The lowest temperature fluctuated between 2C and 8C. It is clear that the temperature in Moscow is colder than in Mumbai. The average number of daylight hours in this city was more than 16 hours with the sunrise time at around 5. 30am and the sunset at 22pm.

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