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This graph outlines changes in the number of citizens, expressed in Million, living in three countries, China, India and the United States of America, over a 50 year time span, from 1950 to 2000. According to the figures, the trends appear to be positive for the three countries cosidered in the graph. However, China and India experienced the most drastic growth, while the USA population grew to a minor degree. Let us go into details. China was inhabited by almost 600 Million people in 1950 and experienced a steady growth till 1960. From 1960 to approximately 1963 the population levelled out to approximately 650 Million. Since then, the growth showed a sharp increase that led to almost double the number of people, approximately 1300 Million in 2000. India experienced a steady rise of its population, sharper over the last 30 years of the time span considered, starting from a little under 400 Million citizens in 1950 to conclude with over 1000 Million in 2000. The trend for the USA is linear with a slight growth: the number of people vary from 170 Million in 1950 to 220 Million in 2000.
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