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The line graph shows good transportation in the UK from 1974 to 2002.

The line graph shows good transportation in the UK from 1974 to 2002. 3L2kd
The given line graph illustrates the goods transportation through road, water, rail and pipeline in the UK between 1974 and 2002. The units of measurement is million tonnes. Overall, it can be seen from the graph that road was the most popular mode whereas pipeline was the least used mode of goods transportation in Britain throughout the whole given period of time. According to the graphical representation, in 1974, road transport was the highest used method to shift goods, with almost 70 million tonnes while pipeline was the lowest used mode which accounts only 3 million tonnes goods. At the same time, both water and rail transport depicted same amounts of goods, that is approximately 40 million tonnes. From 1978, the water transportation have shown a gradual escalation and reached just under 60 million tonnes in 1982. In contrast, goods movement through train depicted a significant drop by almost 10 million tonnes. In 2002, after some fluctuations all four categories transportation reached its peak level except rail, which shows almost same amounts of 1974(40 million tonnes). Road and water transport peaked at approximately 100 and 60 million tonnes; however, pipeline reached its highest point in 1998 and maintained the same till 2002, about 20 million tonnes.
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,
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, rail and pipeline in the UK between 1974 and 2002. The units of measurement
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seen
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road
was the most popular mode whereas pipeline was the least
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used
mode of
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goods
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transportation
in Britain throughout the whole
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period of time.

According to the graphical representation, in 1974,
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transport was the highest
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used
method to shift
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goods
, with almost 70
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million
tonnes while pipeline was the lowest
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used
mode which accounts
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. At the same time, both
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and rail transport depicted same amounts of
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,
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approximately 40
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million
tonnes. From 1978, the
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water
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transportation
have shown a gradual escalation and reached
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under 60
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tonnes in 1982.
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movement through train depicted a significant drop by almost 10
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In 2002, after
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fluctuations all four categories
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transportation
reached its peak level except rail, which
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shows
almost same amounts of 1974(40
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and
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transport peaked at approximately 100 and 60
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, pipeline reached its highest point in 1998 and maintained the same till 2002, about 20
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