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The table illustrates data about 4 fuel types (Nuclear, Coal&Lignite, Petroleum products, and Hydro&wind) that were used to produce electric energy

The table illustrates data about 4 fuel types (Nuclear, Coal&Lignite, Petroleum products, and Hydro&wind) that were used to produce electric energy n13Be
The table illustrates data about 4 fuel types (Nuclear, Coal&Lignite, Petroleum products, and Hydro&wind) that were used to produce electric energy in 5 Asian countries in 2005. Overall, the most spread type of fuel across countries is nuclear, even in Thailand nuclear source did not use at all besides, only Coal & lignite is the fuel that has value more than 50%. In Malaysia the main fuel to generate electricity is Coal & lignite (61%), then Nuclear about one-fifth and 13% is other types of fuel, controversy in Japan, about half accounted for Nuclear fuel, and 3-6% to petroleum products and etc. The remained percentage falls on other types of fuels. In Singapore Coal & lignite, Nuclear, and other types of fuel in priority (42%, 13%, 39% respectively), while South Korea prefers mainly Hydro & wind(48%) and Nuclear(33%) sources of power. In Thailand the most spread types of fuel are petroleum products just over one third, the one-fifth value taken by Hydro & wind power, only 3% for coal % lignite, in addition, other type's percentage is 42.
The table illustrates data about 4
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across countries is nuclear, even in Thailand nuclear source did not
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that has value more than 50%.

In Malaysia the main
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to generate electricity is Coal & lignite (61%), then Nuclear about one-fifth and 13% is
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other
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, controversy in Japan, about half accounted for Nuclear
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, and 3-6% to petroleum products
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. The remained percentage falls on
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In Singapore Coal & lignite, Nuclear, and
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in priority (42%, 13%, 39%
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Hydro & wind(48%) and Nuclear(33%) sources of power. In Thailand the most spread
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are petroleum products
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over one third, the one-fifth value taken by Hydro & wind power,
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3% for coal % lignite,
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,
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type's percentage is 42.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates data about 4 fuel types (Nuclear, Coal&Lignite, Petroleum products, and Hydro&wind) that were used to produce electric energy

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