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The line graph shows the proportion of food production in three countries from 2008 to 2010.

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The information related to yield of food products in India, The Uk and England between 2008 to 2010 is depicted by line graph. The data is calibrated into percentage. Overall, the most striking feature is that excessive food production accountant in England as compared to other ones in given period, whereas less amount of food produced by India At the first glance, it is clear that in 2008, food production in India stood at about 22%, however, it rose dramatically around half in 2009. The yield of food was accounted approximately 55%. With the regard of England, the food production was less than quarter( 22% )after that it followed upward trend nearly 39%in 2009. In next year, it declined by 5%. In the terms of British, in 2008, the minimum proportion of food made out around 10%and it went up approximately to 5%. The trend showed nearly one ten in 2010.
The information related to yield of
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products in India, The
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and England
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is depicted
by line graph. The data
is calibrated
into percentage.
Overall
, the most striking feature is that excessive
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food
production accountant in England as compared to other ones in
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given
period, whereas less amount of
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food
produced by India

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first
glance, it is
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clear
that in 2008,
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food
production in India stood at about 22%,
however
, it rose
dramatically
around half in 2009. The yield of
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food
was accounted
approximately 55%. With the regard of England, the
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food
production was less than quarter
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(
22%
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)
after that it followed upward trend
nearly
39%in 2009. In
next
year, it declined by 5%. In the terms of British, in 2008, the minimum proportion of
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food
made out around 10%and it went up approximately to 5%. The trend
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showed
nearly
one ten in 2010.
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IELTS academic The line graph shows the proportion of food production in three countries from 2008 to 2010.

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