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The table gives information in 2007, how much people use rail transports in UK, USA, Japan and Italy

The table gives information in 2007, how much people use rail transports in UK, USA, Japan and Italy 8Q0Mk
Firstly, UK 5, 9 percent people had been using railways, but this information do not give metro. In 2007, 770 passenger kilometres per head of population and the cargo carried only 22. 2 billions of tons in the UK. Also, this year in USA number of people using railway was go down and only 0. 3 percent people had used rail transports. And per head of population are 80 kilometres and cargo carried was only 2. 820 billions of tons. However, in Japan more people was using railways and Japan's rail transportation was increase than other countries in 2017. The using rail transport 27 percent, per head of population 1, 980 percent and cargo carried was 23. 01 billions of tons in Japan. Finally, in Italy, 5, 5% people use rail transport and per head of population was 780%. This year, cargo carried normally 21. 9 billion of tons in Italy. Overall, in 2007, Japan's rail transportation was increase highly, UK and Italy was norma. But in USA railway go down because peoples do not using railways.
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transportation was increase than other countries in 2017. The using
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transport 27
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