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The table gives information about the consumption ate of three products in four countries.

The table gives information about the consumption ate of three products in four countries. kYDYO

A glance at the table provided reveals the use of rice, wheat and maize in in 4 different countries. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the consumption rate of wheat was the highest, while the usage of maize was less common among the given countries. Nevertheless that the wheat was most consumed product in all 4 countries, in Cambodia it accounted for a mere 18 calories per person per day, whereas in Egypt it made up the highest number of 1085 calories. The expenditure of rice in Mexico was almost the same as in Poland (57 and 19 calories respectively), while interestingly, in stark contrast, the maize consumption in these countries was absolutely different (1083 in Mexico and merely 0 calories in Poland).

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 that the consumption rate of wheat was the highest, while the usage of maize was less common among the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
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 countries.

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Nevertheless
 that the wheat was most consumed product in all 4 countries, in Cambodia it accounted for a mere 18 calories per person per day, whereas in Egypt it made up the highest number of 1085 calories. The expenditure of rice in Mexico was almost the same as in Poland (57 and 19 calories respectively
), while interestingly
, in stark contrast, the maize consumption in these countries was absolutely
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different
 (1083 in Mexico and merely
 0 calories in Poland). 