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the graph below shows the value in us dollar of four investment funds from 1988 to 2014

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The line graph depicts the informationa about the four different tyoe of fund such as gold, company shares, fine arts and property in value of us dollars between 1988 and 2014 Overall, it is obeserved that, the maximum investment fund in gold and the minimum were property To begin with, in 1988, the value of us dollar were maximum in fine art and than at least in property. in 1990, comapny shares investment were increased and the manimum investment in property. After 10 years, in 2000, gold investment were increased about 100 us dollars and it increased rapidly in the end of the year till 2014 about 350 us dollar. Furthermore, property fund were decreased till the end of the year 2014 approxiametly 150 us dollar and company shares and fine art both are equally investment fund in us dollar about 200
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shares, fine arts and
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in gold and the minimum were property

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were maximum in fine art and
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shares
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. After 10 years, in 2000, gold
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were increased
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of the year till 2014 about 350 us dollar.

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150 us
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IELTS academic the graph below shows the value in us dollar of four investment funds from 1988 to 2014

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