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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. 7OL2
The pie chart Demonstrates Percentage Of Male And Female who Took And clear Their Driving Test From 1980 to 2010. overall Female had More Passing Rate As compared To Male Wheras Significant Percentage OF Women Passed There Test In 2000 And Both Gender Had Least Passing Rate In 1980. Women Had less Than 50% clearing Rate In 1980 However, this Figure Rose 1980 Where Almost 52 Percent Women Pass Their Test. Furthermore, Women Performance Was Improved over The Period And Enourmous Number Of women Passed There Test In 2000 Around 68 Percent. Although in 2010 there is Merely Fall In percentage By Might be 5%
The pie chart Demonstrates Percentage Of Male And Female who Took And
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Their Driving
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Test
From 1980 to 2010.

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overall
Female had More Passing Rate As compared To Male
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Significant Percentage OF
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Women
Passed There
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Test
In 2000

And Both Gender Had
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Least
Passing Rate In
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1980. Women
Had less Than 50% clearing Rate In 1980
However
, this Figure Rose 1980 Where Almost 52 Percent
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Women
Pass Their
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Test
.
Furthermore
,
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Women
Performance Was
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Improved
over The Period And
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Enourmous
Number Of
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women
Passed There
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Test
In 2000 Around 68 Percent.
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Fall In percentage By Might be 5%
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IELTS academic The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

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  American English
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104 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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