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The table gives information about the amount of money which was spent on distinct types of food and beverages in Europe in 1992, 2002 and 2012.

The table gives information about the amount of money which was spent on distinct types of food and beverages in Europe in 1992, 2002 and 2012. XVQmE
The table gives information about the quantity of money which was spent on distinct types of food and beverages in Europe in 1992, 2002 and 2012. It is clear that European people spent the highest amount of money on beef and chicken. On the other hand, coffee and butter/margarine category had the lowest expense in the table. In 1992, the European consumers spent on beef and chick, at 45 and 38 millions of euros, was noticeably higher than that of the potatoes which only reached 11 millions of euros. Despite having increased gradually and reached 18 million euros in 2012, the expenditure on potatoes was still lower than those of beef and chicken, getting to 54 and 56 million euros in the same year, respectively. It can be seen that the expense spent on two types of drinks – coffee and milk – has reached to 9 and 13 million of euros, which was higher than that of butter and margarine, at only 8 million of euros. While the budget used on the coffee experienced a dramatic fall of 9 million euros in 1992 to only 7 million euros in 2012, the figure for milk rose slowly to 14 millions of euros respectively. From 1992 to 2012, the expenditure on butter and margarine still remained at around 8 millions of euros.
The table gives information about the quantity of money which was
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on distinct types of food and beverages in Europe in 1992, 2002 and 2012.

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that European
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people
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the highest amount of money on beef and chicken.
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, coffee and butter/margarine category had the lowest expense in the table.

In 1992, the European consumers
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on beef and chick, at 45 and 38
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of euros, was
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higher than that of the potatoes which
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reached 11
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millions
of euros. Despite having increased
gradually
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million
euros in 2012, the expenditure on potatoes was
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lower than those of beef and chicken, getting to 54 and 56
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that the expense
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on two types of drinks
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coffee and milk
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has reached to 9 and 13
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of euros, which was higher than that of butter and margarine, at
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8
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on the coffee experienced a dramatic fall of 9
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euros in 1992 to
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7
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. From 1992 to 2012, the expenditure on butter and margarine
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