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The table gives information about railway system of 6 cities

The table gives information about railway system of 6 cities pReO2

The table chart delineates data on underground rail networks in six cities. Overall, the largest figures refer to London, Paris and Tokyo, railway networks of three other cities are smaller and serve less people. The London underground is the oldest system, having been opened in 1863. It is also considered as the largest system with 394 kilometres of route. The second largest railway network, in Paris, is approximately half size of London underground, but serves more people every year. Although Tokyo system is the third in terms of size, it is the most used one with 1972 million passengers per year. Moving on to three newer networks, the Washington DC underground is quite larger with 126 kilometres of route, compared with 11 kilometres and 28 kilometres for Kyoto and Los Angeles, respectively. The Kyoto system is the smallest which serves only 45 million passengers on a yearly basis, the Los Angeles underground railway network is the newest that was opened in 2001.

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