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The chart below shows the destination of students graduated from physics courses and Art & Design courses in a European country in 2017.

The chart below shows the destination of students graduated from physics courses and Art & Design courses in a European country in 2017. qV1m5
This graph shows in 2017 the destination of students graduated from physics courses and Art & Design courses in a European country. In the subject of Art & Design, most of the students' destination are employment which the percentage almost arrived 70. But in Physics, employment was not the only option for most of them, also a large part of them choose to have a further study. As we can see that the number of students in Art & Design who choose further study and working and studying was the least, both of them were about 8%. Then the percentage of unemployed and others were close. In Physics, the percentage of another three destination were approximate. In summary, we can know whatever in Physics or Art & Design, employment was the most of the graduated students want to choose.
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in 2017 the destination of students graduated from physics courses and
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courses in a European country.

In the subject of
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Art
&
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Design
, most of the students' destination are employment which the percentage almost arrived 70.
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in Physics, employment was not the
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option for most of them,
also
a large part of them choose to have a
further
study.

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that the number of students in
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Art
&
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Design
who choose
further
study and working and studying was the least, both of them were about 8%. Then the percentage of unemployed
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and others
were close. In Physics, the percentage of another three destination were approximate.

In summary, we can know whatever in Physics or
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Art
&
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Design
, employment was the most of the graduated students want to choose.
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