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writing task 1 : process of produce tea and making a cup of tea

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The diagram explains the process by which tea is made and how to make a cup of tea. Overall, there are seventeen stages in the diagram beginning with sowing tea in India, China and culminating in drinking As we look at the picture, tea is grown in India and China. The first stages is sowing tea seeds into the ground and let them grow in the sun. The second stage is picking and putting tea leaves in basket. Thirdly, we need to dry the tea leaves under the sunshine. The next step is that the tea leaves are packed into the boxes and then loaded onto a lorry. The following step is that tea boxes are delivered in the supermaket and then bought by customers. After the customers take the tea home, they start making tea to enjoy. First of all, they put some water in the kettle and boil. While we are waiting for water boils, putting the tea bag into a glass. When water is boiled, the pour the water boiling in the glass already has tea bag. The customers can add some milk and surgar if they like. The last stage is drinking and enjoying.
The diagram
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explains
the process by which
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tea
is made
and how to
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make
a cup of tea.

Overall
, there are seventeen
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stages
in the diagram beginning with sowing
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tea
in India, China and culminating in drinking

As we look at the picture,
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tea
is grown
in India and China. The
first
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stages
is sowing
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tea
seeds into the ground and
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let
them grow in the sun. The second
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stage
is picking and putting
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tea
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leaves
in basket.
Thirdly
, we need to dry the
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tea
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leaves
under the sunshine. The
next
step is that the
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tea
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leaves
are packed
into the boxes and then loaded onto a lorry. The following step is that
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tea
boxes
are delivered
in the
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supermaket
and then
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bought
by customers.

After the customers take the
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tea
home, they
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start
making
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tea
to enjoy.
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First of all
, they put
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some
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water
in the kettle and boil. While we are waiting for
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water
boils, putting the
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tea
bag into a glass. When
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water
is boiled
,
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the pour
the
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water
boiling in the glass already has
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tea
bag. The customers can
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add
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some
milk and
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surgar
if they like. The last
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stage
is drinking and enjoying.

IELTS academic writing task 1: process of produce tea and making a cup of tea

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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