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The table gives figures for student applications and acceptances for UK university

The table gives figures for student applications and acceptances for UK university 3LRA5
The table depicts information on student registration and acquiescence in terms of three different fields (tourism, transport, and travel) of UK post-educational programs over a period of three years from 2000. As can be seen, the figures for men were higher than those of women in all items and an upward trend was witnessed. Both the numbers of men and women applicants declined over the period reported. Starting in 2000 at 3, 400, the quantity of male students applying courses went down to 2, 750 in 2002. Likewise, this number for females started with the figure being a fourth as many as that of male before decreasing to over 700 students. The rate of both sexes students accepted to courses only ranged between 15% to a fifth of those applied. Furthermore, the amount of men and women students both slightly fluctuated. While the highest number for men was recorded in 2001 with 600 candidates, this was also true for the figure of women applicants with the figure at 200, being a third lower than men, in the same year.
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fields (tourism, transport, and travel) of UK post-educational programs over a period of three years from 2000. As can be
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were higher than those of
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in all items and an upward trend
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Both the numbers of
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and
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applicants declined over the period reported. Starting in 2000 at 3, 400, the quantity of male
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applying courses went down to 2, 750 in 2002.
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as that of male
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decreasing to over 700 students.

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to courses
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ranged between 15% to a fifth of those applied.
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and
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both
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applicants with the
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at 200, being a third lower than
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, in the same year.
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