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number of articles published per year by male and female university professors

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the line graph illustrates the publication rate of UK based universities professors, categorized by male and female, and the bar chart measures publications in four selected universities, both are during 2006 to 2012. overall, it is immediately apparent that men had published more article than women. Furthermore, university of Warwick was pioneer in the number of publications. Turn to line graph, it can be seen that the number of publications related to the men stood at 3000 per year which was three times more than women in 2006. Initially, although there was a considerable gap between the number of publications amongst men and women, this gap reduced in order to, the rate of articles for women rose dramatically to reach close the men in 2012. Although the number of articles had published by men rose slightly during the period, this rate for women rose significantly to reach close the men in 2012. With regard to bar chart, the most published paper was in the subject of humanities, science and art respectively. Between four university the first rank for three subjects was belong to university of Warwick by the number of publications in humanities (120), science (90) and art (about 88). York university by about 87 publications(approximately 34) in the field of humanities had the second rank; likewise, the university of Sheffield ranked second between other universities due to the number of publications in art. Interestingly, university of Birmingham had the lowest rate in all three subjects.
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had published more article than
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of Warwick was pioneer in the
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in 2006.
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IELTS academic number of articles published per year by male and female university professors

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